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I'm in Cloud 9

I'm in cloud 9 by simplymarrimye
The reasons why I'm in cloud 9































Beyond happiness is what you feel
when you're in cloud 9
It's like you're floating on air
and you wish to stay there forever

Living a life in comfort and wealth
brings an extreme euphoria
but  a castle is an empty place
without a loving king and queen to embrace

Working for a job that pays high
means a career to keep
yet doing something that makes you dispirited
can leave you sad and exhausted

  Seeing your most favorite people
may drive you crazy
But being with the person who value your being
is more worthwhile and exciting.

Reaching your goals and dreams
gives you a level of satisfaction
You get hold of what you wanted
Savor the victory... no time to be wasted.

Have you been in cloud 9?
I know you have gone there many times
but no matter how seldom or frequent 
It's how you spend and cherish every moment


25 comments:

  1. Hmm, your post made me think a lot. Actually, it turns out I have never been in Cloud 9, probably because I did not have a lot of happy events in my life besides having my 2 kids but even then I did not feel that entire bliss and joy you are talking about because I was scared with the responsibility of raising them. Anyways, I wish I had similar emotions one day. Lovely poem!

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    1. Being in cloud 9 depends on how you see happiness. But if you think you haven't been there because you never feel the joy overflowing... then there's something missing in you that prevent you from experiencing ultimate pleasure.

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  2. What a nice poem you've got there! It made me look back and check when did I ever have a cloud 9. The last part of the poem is very inspiring. Thanks for posting and sharing this to us. <3

    xo,
    Louise of The Legendary Ukayista

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    1. Different people may achieve happiness in different ways. The level of satisfaction of one person may vary from another. I truly appreciate your thoughts about this poem and I'm glad you find it inspiring.

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  3. Euphoria! Seize the day! Cherish the moment! This halloween, I am reminded to be with my family, and be in cloud 9 as well. :-)

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    1. Simple pleasures like being with our family... just having a conversation over a cup of coffee can be worthwhile and memorable.

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  4. I love the cloud 9 feeling too! incomparable and inspiring! congrats and continue the happiness Mari

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    1. Thanks! I wish you will be in cloud 9 as often as possible. Cheers :)

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  5. I get my cloud 9 moments when I travel and when I see my family complete. As we grow older, we will realize that moments and experiences have more value over material things.

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    1. Inner peace and happiness can be obtained only if we keep our mind open to understand and our heart... big enough to spread love.

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  6. I agree. We tend to be distracted by the less important things of this world, then find ourselves miserable and dispirited for having chosen so. :(

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    1. We have our choices to make so, we might as well, choose to be happy and make every moment counts.

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  7. Cloud 9 is a state of mind. It need not be fancy or expensive. As long as we are with the people we hold dear and are happy and content together, that is already my Cloud 9.

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    1. We can seek happiness in every corner of the universe even the simplest of anything can make us jump for joy. It's how we perceive cloud 9 in our own point of view.

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  8. I am in Cloud9 whenever I am with people I love, whenever I work hard and see meaning in the work that I do and whenever the grace of God touches my heart. There are so many reasons to be in Cloud 9, I wish I can write a poem as well as you do.

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  9. I'm always at Cloud 5-8? Haha... I'm easily pleased but yet I'm ambitious, aiming for higher achievements... I try not to get overly confident or happy so that I remember to be on top form!
    Love how you said to treasure and cherish every moment, afterall, we only live once!

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  10. Aww, a lovely poem! Indeed it is about how you spend your time and each moment should be cherished as time moves far too quickly! Simone x

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  11. I salute every mother for their patience and their unending love. Though we are a big headache (sometimes), we know for a fact that we are your source of happiness, and we will always cherish that fact.

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  12. It is a great feeling to be in Cloud 9! i am in cloud 9 whenever I am with the people I love especially if my husband and daughter are both here. We seldom have time together.

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  13. Cloud Nine is achievable if you only put your mind to it. You are right though, money and power will not always bring happiness..

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  14. Cloud 9 to me is unlimited time learning my piano.
    Work and School exhausted most of my time. I look forward to graduation when I can finally do that!

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  15. that's a lovely poem. Every verse I'm reading really tells me that you're elated!

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  16. What a beautiful poem for your family, Ate! :)

    Seeing your most favorite people
    may drive you crazy
    But being with the person who value your being
    is more worthwhile and exciting.

    I love that stanza. It's so true! :)

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  17. Beautiful! Thanks babe - reading this as I'm starting my day at the computer, and i have to say, this makes a nice start to a Friday!

    Best,
    Ling Tan
    www.kidsonboard.net

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  18. Aww this is just sweet! :) It's also seldom for me to be on Cloud 9. Given the work load I have, but I still linger on those moments.

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